Poem One Draft: Pencil

Title??
This item that I am looking at
Derek, again, review my comments for direction. --GaryIt can do damage with one hit.
It can be man's best friend if used in the right way.
It's sharpe<spelling, straight and slim,
depending on how you sharpen it.
The yellow brings the sun of day,
without it I wont get an A. <avoid playful end rhymes<if you want your poems to rhyme, then use internal rhyme<I never thought that a pencil had so much such value!